Lynda Barry had an unhappy home life as a child. Her
parents frequently fought, and the house was often crowded with visiting
relatives. She and her brother slept on the couch when their room was occupied.
They spent these nights watching television with the sound off. When she was
seven years old, a particularly bad night drove her out of the house. Gripped
by an unexplained panic, she made her way to her school in the pre-dawn
darkness. The chaotic atmosphere of her home allowed her to slip away
completely unnoticed. Her fears were eased when she was found by Mr. Gunderson,
the school’s friendly janitor. He walked with her to her classroom. Oh the way,
she was surprised to encounter members of the faculty preparing to begin their
day at work. Every one of them greeted her with warmth and acceptance. Mr.
Gunderson left her with her teacher, Mrs. LeSane, who welcomed her into her
classroom. Mrs. LeSane invited Lynda to go to the back of the room and paint. Troubled
students were often invited to make art for Mrs. LeSane, who would post them on
a special board. Barry recognizes in retrospect that this opportunity to be
creative provided a vital emotional outlet for her. School was a sanctuary, a
place where she received the love and support she desperately needed. By using
this personal anecdote, Barry states that the cutting of arts programs from the
public school roster can hurt children in situations like hers. She makes an
impassioned plea to her audience to understand and help these children.
I really enjoyed your paper because it wasn't too flowery, but there were sentences that were descriptive. The one phrase that really stuck out to me was, "Gripped by an unexplained panic...pre-dawn darkness."
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your piece because you had an accurate summarization of Lynda's story. There was no personal feelings in your writing, while still giving a decent amount of details to the story.
ReplyDeleteNice job of conveying the content and even the feeling of the Barry piece. Your descriptive language was nice without overpowering the basic purpose of a summary--briefly outlining the main points of the piece. I like your varied sentence structures, but would have appreciate a use of paragraphs to set off major ideas.
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